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    iKevinly
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    At Least

    Post by iKevinly on October 30th 2011, 5:19 pm

    At Least

    How the world shivers,
    Down to its bones.
    How the world turns cold,
    For each and every stone.

    "But it's okay,
    Because at long as the sun still shines,
    And while the birds still sing,
    And, at least the sky is still blue,
    You will be fine."

    Oh! How the world burns,
    Down to its soul.
    Everything ashes,
    Eaten as a whole.

    "But it's okay,
    Because as long as the sun still shines,
    And while the birds still sing,
    And, at least the sky is still blue,
    You will be fine."

    You will be fine. . .

    You will be fine. . .
    You will be fine. . .
    Because at least the sky is still blue. . .


    But. . .
    But when the sun eclipses,
    And the birds struggle,
    And the sky turns grey.

    But when the sun vanishes!
    And the birds die,
    And the sky turns black.

    But when the sun calls down hell,
    And the birds screech in pain,
    And the sky turns into nothing. . .

    What then?


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    Re: At Least

    Post by Ketchup Girl on November 1st 2011, 9:32 pm

    I applaud the font change, it was kinda scary, although hard to read. I also applaud your using a font that wasn't Chiller... oh wait, that's not even an option on this site. Nevermind.

    Why did I think of Sophie when reading the poem? (The first part?)
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    Post by Sophie on November 3rd 2011, 9:51 pm

    That was...
    Scary.

    I agree.


    But I also applaud the use of the font changes. It had a really heavy impact on the poem! Nice job~
    I prefer to think that I'm a more first part poem person too
    Thanks Monikaaaaa~ <3

    But that's okay! Because we are all first part poem people deep down inside!


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