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    Post by iKevinly on August 25th 2011, 7:43 pm

    Rainbow. . .

    How do the colors shine
    When we're crying down below?
    Are they bragging, are they laughing?

    How do they shine?
    Why the red,
    Why the orange?
    Why the fancy colors from a mystery?
    Why so high above?
    While we're crying down below?

    I deserve more, I deserve those colors.
    So a ladder would help, right?
    A ladder has to help me climb
    And touch the perpetual happiness
    And wonders of this mystical thing.

    Yet, a ladder wasn't enough.
    So instead, perhaps I was foolish.
    Perhaps I need to think bigger.
    It's okay, I'll go get a vehicle and drive towards the rainbow.
    Yet, it's so far away.

    Mocking me with its happiness,
    Mocking me with its joy and colors.
    Yellow.
    Green.
    I want those too.
    I want to be happy as well!

    Inside I go to grab a higher ladder,
    Perhaps then I could touch the colors.
    Perhaps then I could see that nature loves me back,
    And that she isn't mocking.
    Perhaps.

    Yet, when I returned with the ladder so much higher,
    The colors were gone.
    The colors and happiness were all gone--faded.
    And so, those colors are fake to me.
    There was no red,
    Nor green,
    Nor blue.

    There was only black.
    And darkness.
    And terror.

    My rainbow blooms and shines every night in my cold room.
    On the door.
    On my ceiling.
    Everywhere.
    My rainbows are everywhere!

    I've achieved happiness!
    This is what I want!
    I finally have a rainbow!
    A rainbow that's so beautiful. . .
    So beautiful.

    This is my rainbow.
    I will never leave it,
    I will never leave the happiness I so wished to achieve once before.
    I am glad I found this,
    This pure dark rainbow in my own room.
    Silly me.

    I am now content
    With this rainbow I have.

    My beautiful black rainbow.


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    Re: Rainbow

    Post by iKevinly on August 25th 2011, 7:43 pm

    Sophie wrote:
    Write something about rainbows next time, I dare you. AAAAARRRRGGGG

    Challenge Accepted


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    Re: Rainbow

    Post by ZeroCyanide on August 25th 2011, 9:30 pm

    And whatever happened to Roy G. Biv?
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    Re: Rainbow

    Post by iKevinly on August 25th 2011, 9:40 pm

    SCREW ROG Y BLV


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    Re: Rainbow

    Post by Sophie on August 26th 2011, 4:06 pm

    YOU EVEN MANAGED TO MAKE THIS SOUND SAD WOW.



    Nice poem! The contrast of colors and stuff was interesting~
    I like that line about nature...
    No.
    No wait.

    Your next poem should be happy.
    Like, you should accept this challenge and write a happy poem. c:


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    Re: Rainbow

    Post by Ketchup Girl on August 26th 2011, 9:38 pm

    You made rainbows scary. I'm not sure if I should be impressed or terrified.

    Color!
    (AGH, ITS GONNA EAT US ALL ALIVE!)'
    But nice poem! I like the part with the rainbows! And the ending! It was kind of creepy, like the person lost their mind or something. Or took some drugs, which would be equally scary.

    Next time, I concur with Sophie in daring you to write something that is

    a) legitimately happy and cherful, and
    b) doesn't suddenly turn dark halfway through

    And where's One More Time? Come on, give it an ending! Even if it's something lame and short, like "and then they all died". DON'T ABANDON YOUR CHILD, KEVIN. IT WILL NOT SURVIVE ON ITS OWN IN THIS CRUEL WORLD. IT WILL GET ADOPTED BY SOME DOUCHEBAGS WHO TREAT IT LIKE A SLAVE OR ABUSE IT OR IT WILL BE FORCED TO TURN TO A CAREER IN ALTERNATIVE SOURCES OF HAPPINESS TO PAY FOR FOOD.That, Kevin, is why you should never abandon a story halfway through.
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    Re: Rainbow

    Post by iKevinly on August 26th 2011, 11:24 pm

    Ketchup Girl wrote:
    And where's One More Time? Come on, give it an ending! Even if it's something lame and short, like "and then they all died". DON'T ABANDON YOUR CHILD, KEVIN. IT WILL NOT SURVIVE ON ITS OWN IN THIS CRUEL WORLD. IT WILL GET ADOPTED BY SOME DOUCHEBAGS WHO TREAT IT LIKE A SLAVE OR ABUSE IT OR IT WILL BE FORCED TO TURN TO A CAREER IN ALTERNATIVE SOURCES OF HAPPINESS TO PAY FOR FOOD.That, Kevin, is why you should never abandon a story halfway through.

    XD AHAH!
    It's funny because Sophie asked me if I wanted to give her permission to end the story. ;)

    XD I will~
    If anything,
    I'm more encouraged to end One More Time than to get to the middle of VOID: ZERO.

    :) Perhaps! Maybe tomorrow :)


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    Re: Rainbow

    Post by Sophie on August 26th 2011, 11:44 pm

    And you should tell me, so I can set up that beautiful subforum again. <3

    (Permission to end? When'd I say that? D:)


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    Re: Rainbow

    Post by iKevinly on August 26th 2011, 11:51 pm

    In your PM :P

    And perhaps! XD


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    Re: Rainbow

    Post by ZeroCyanide on August 26th 2011, 11:59 pm

    YEAH KEVIN
    IF YOU JUST
    LEAVE IT THERE
    SOMEONE WILL MAKE A FANFICTION AND RUIN IT ALL
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    Re: Rainbow

    Post by iKevinly on August 27th 2011, 12:33 am

    AHAH XD


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    Re: Rainbow

    Post by Sophie on September 2nd 2011, 5:04 pm

    Kevin~~
    It's a no homework weekend~~
    You have plenty of free time now~~
    So, any ahem, literary plans this weekend? :3

    OHOHOHOHO
    OHOHOHOHOHOHOHO~~


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    Re: Rainbow

    Post by iKevinly on September 2nd 2011, 6:51 pm

    xD Ahahaha I feel the words One More Time coming up :P
    Perhaps! I'll see :)


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    Re: Rainbow

    Post by Sophie on September 2nd 2011, 9:27 pm

    Just say the word, and it shall be done! Yo yo!


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