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    Post by iKevinly on August 10th 2011, 12:19 am

    Who Am I?
    A small "Hey Jude" Twist~


    http://k003.kiwi6.com/hotlink/077uz48k8b/audacity_wav_file.wav

    ALRIGHT!
    First thing's first!

    THE DISCLAIMER:

    ONE: THIS IS NOT A WHOLE SONG. I really wanted to see if Audacity would be an alright program! With the help of Sophie's "Quick Fix" that she gave me, it did indeed become a fine program to use.

    TWO: It's One Verse! And if you've heard Hey Jude, it's the beginning verse. I wrote, though, two verses for the song however am only singing one since I've been testing out harmonies (I know they sound bad ) and other things.

    THREE: I know, it sounds bad.

    FOUR: I'm going to restate #3 so you all can get the picture of: LIE TO ME AND SAY ITS GOOD >:D

    FIVE: But! How did you feel about the middle part? The ending, I know, wasn't perfectly at the same time but would be near impossible with just a click-and-drag-and-hope type of system I had going on. The middle part, however, I felt was off because of the volumes of the other parts.

    All in all!

    This is just a test.

    Tomorrow or the day after, I'll be releasing a longer song called: "Baritone" with, hopefully, a non-parody theme in which the melodies and beats are all mine (although I may steal from the song, "For the First Time" by The Script.

    :) Thanks!!

    ~Kev

    P.S. - Everything was done with my mouth and voice only. <3


    LYRICS:


    Who am I? To say my name,
    When I don’t live life~ I just play your game~
    I feel like~ My mind is lost and destroyed. . .
    But it’s not void~ In there is your name.

    Who am I? To be happy?
    All alone when~ You are all I see.
    I lost~ Myself! I lost who I am,
    I hope I can~ Stay as Kevin Lee.


    P.P.S. - I KNOW! This is somewhat depressing.
    This song, since there is a 99% chance that Wayne would never care to log in and see this thread (don't show him~), is about Wayne Cardoza since I feel as if he's been controlling my life recently.
    I just, honestly, can't get him out of my mind and it's actually starting to affect my life.

    His name honestly made me throw up at Emma's house once. Just the sheer rememberence of him~
    And his existence has pretty much made me fear going anywhere outside since the only times I've actually went outside of my house was to a place where Wayne was at--therefore my stomach churns when I think of going outside because of him.

    And yes, I do have the (stupidest in my mind) crush on him.
    Can't help it,
    Yet I need help for it.
    Blagh :)

    Hope your ears didn't die too much.
    :( The harmonies were difficult.
    <3


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    Post by Sophie on August 10th 2011, 1:13 am

    Ahh~
    Acapella, the hardest form of singing~
    +respect!

    It sounds nice. :)
    Good job on those harmonies! And the beatboxing! I didn't know you could do that! :O

    Hey, just some advice, you might want to lower the sound on the harmony tracks, since it'll let it blend in a little more. Also, cut of the first and last .001 or something seconds of each track. You can hear the click as the microphone turns on. <3


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    Post by iKevinly on August 10th 2011, 1:15 am

    Oooh really!? Hmm~ I didn't care to edit out the beginning pauses since, well, I had to rerecord my voice and all and needed some time before singing but thanks for the advice! :D

    Although, this track is, in no way, going to be public outside of here hopefully xD.

    Yay for respect and Sophie's lie of "It sounds nice. :)"!

    =D


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    Post by Sophie on August 10th 2011, 1:17 am

    B-but that wasn't a lie... GRR


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    Post by iKevinly on August 10th 2011, 1:18 am

    Okay, whatever you say.


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    Post by Aulina16 on August 10th 2011, 1:20 am

    It really does sound great....and I'm not good with singing advice so I hope you don't mind if I don't give any. And now I will use and Emoticon......random one: Want a piece of me?
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    Post by iKevinly on August 10th 2011, 1:22 am

    XD Ahaha thanks Aulina!


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    Post by ZeroCyanide on August 10th 2011, 11:45 pm

    WAIT I SWEAR THERE WAS A WHATCHAMAHOOSIT THERE SO I COULD JUST CLICK PLAY AND NOT A LINK

    MAYBE I WAS HALLUCINATING
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    Post by iKevinly on August 10th 2011, 11:46 pm

    :3 Ihave no idea how to embed XD


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    Re: Who Am I?

    Post by Sophie on August 11th 2011, 12:21 am

    Shall I teach you?
    Ohohoho Yo yo!

    (Just ask, young grasshopper. Your sempai will teach you. <3)


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    Post by iKevinly on August 11th 2011, 12:26 am

    But you're too BA D:!


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    Post by poetryinmotion on August 11th 2011, 10:32 pm

    Agreeing with the stuff Sophie pointed out already~
    And yes, this is SUPER depressing, Kevin. We need to inject you with some happyness.
    And now I too shall utilize an emoticon
    (one that for some reason makes me think of Sophie)~
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    Post by amy.loves.coco22 on August 16th 2011, 7:25 pm

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