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    A story idea...

    Post by Ketchup Girl on July 28th 2011, 12:24 pm

    Well, so I have this idea, and I'm thinking of making it into an uber-long comic or something.

    So there's this guy (very specific, I know) who's stuck in this bizzare world, full of bright colors and talking animals and explosions and skyscrapers. Really, the world is nothing more than his hallucination (he's high) and as such everything happens according to his wishes. He can control the laws of physics and stuff. And even though this world is full of giant monsters and ominous voices in the sky that he has the task of defeating, he doesn't want to leave.

    Then, one day, he finds a small child with two guns and a scarf, which appears to be a separate, self-aware being, meaning that he can't control it. He names the kid "Gun Kid" (because "Scarf Kid" is just lame) and decides to send the Gun Kid back where he came from as soon as possible. Because otherwise, bad things will happen. You know?

    I don't know, none of the plot really makes any sense at the moment and I don't really have an ending planned out, but I think that both Gun Kid and the yet-unnamed main character will make it back to reality and die.

    Should I go forward with it?

    (Please reply, even if you think the idea is retarded or something.)
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    Re: A story idea...

    Post by Sophie on July 28th 2011, 2:39 pm

    It sounds interesting. Will they have to defeat all large monsters and learn about the power of friendship?

    Is the guy going to be kind of an anti-hero?
    If the guy is stuck in his hallucination world, does that mean that he's in a coma or something in the real world?

    This world is completely based off of his hallucinations, right? Where did Gun Kid come from? OOOOOOH MYSTERY~

    I'd like to read this story, if you decide to draw/write it! The plot is a bit unclear right now, but since this is just an outline, if you can elaborate on it in your head, it'll be fine! It sounds really new and different, and I'm interested in how this will develop.

    (Ahaha, this plot reminded me so much of this meme)




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    Re: A story idea...

    Post by iKevinly on July 29th 2011, 6:19 pm

    WOW.
    I really like the idea! I DEFINITELY would love to see a comic or even jut a writing of this! Seems like a great story line.

    If you're not going to write the story, do tell! It's an interesting idea that sparked my thoughts instantly.

    A world of power and control to one person,
    And that person has a possibility to leave this world by defeating the evil.
    But, he doesn't want to.
    ^^^

    That's just interesting in itself!

    And the fact that now he has a motive (the Gun Kid), he wants to leave or at least, for the kid.

    If it were me, I like your idea of how they die.

    Perhaps a bitter sweet (maybe not the right words but. . .) ending. As in, they return to reality where the world is in turmoil and he has no more power.
    Except,
    He has his kid.
    And that's all that matters as the helicopter flew over their heads and dropped a bomb.

    ~End

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    Re: A story idea...

    Post by Sophie on July 29th 2011, 6:30 pm

    So dramatic lololololol

    Still interesting in a sense. WRITE THIS STORY MONIIIIIKAAAAAA~~


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    Re: A story idea...

    Post by ZeroCyanide on July 29th 2011, 7:44 pm

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    Re: A story idea...

    Post by ZeroCyanide on July 29th 2011, 7:50 pm

    Oh yeah, and also you should totally make a comic because your comics are fun to read. Then we could fill up that horribly empty art section with something awesome.
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    Re: A story idea...

    Post by iKevinly on July 29th 2011, 7:52 pm

    Ahaha that poor art forum :)


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    Re: A story idea...

    Post by Ketchup Girl on July 31st 2011, 11:58 pm

    Thanks a lot for the replies, I'll start working on it!

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    Re: A story idea...

    Post by iKevinly on August 1st 2011, 1:53 am

    XD GOGOOGOGO!

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    Re: A story idea...

    Post by Orange on August 14th 2011, 1:35 pm

    OOh this sounds good, I have an idea!!! (Oh and sorry if someone else already said this, im too lazy to read ALL the posts)
    After all the bad guys and fighting and action stuff, the Gun Kid could be like a manifestation of himself and the whole time his inner self has been trying to bring him back to the real world!
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    Actually now that I think about it...that probably sounds really lame
    never mind hmmm

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