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    World in Diamonds

    Post by iKevinly on September 27th 2011, 12:14 am

    World in Diamonds

    The World is in Diamonds.
    Where crystalline antagonists are frozen,
    And tears and happiness are frozen
    In an ever-lasting reflecting glow.

    The beauty of the stone chilled our bones,
    Until we became one with our desire,
    And until we became solid and still,
    Dead yet wanting.

    Nothing burned down in flames,
    Nor drowned in despair,
    Nor suffocated until sorrow,
    Crept up their souls.

    Everything was fine,
    Everything was normal.
    Yet, then tell me why,
    The World is in Diamonds?

    And everything is dead.


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    Re: World in Diamonds

    Post by Ketchup Girl on September 27th 2011, 9:36 pm

    For whatever reason, I was reminded of the White Witch.

    Awesome poem, even though I was incapable of understanding it. Ah, well. It's kind of scary, too. All poems that end in the word "dead" are automatically scary. Nice job.

    (On a completely unrelated note: WHY COMIC SANS, KEVIN? WHY?)
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    Re: World in Diamonds

    Post by iKevinly on September 28th 2011, 12:01 am

    WHY NOT COMIC SANS, MONIKA!? WHY NOT!?!?!?
    :) But thanks!
    And yeah x_x This poem isn't depressing more so aiming for a creepy effect.

    This poem is pretty much talking about desire and the down effects of it.
    Diamond being our desire and the world turning into Diamonds--cold immobile stone would be an outcome.

    Just a fun little scenario~


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    Re: World in Diamonds

    Post by ZeroCyanide on September 28th 2011, 6:04 am

    LULZ KEVIN
    YOU DIDN'T KNOW
    COMIC SANS IS THE WORST TEXT YOU COULD POSSIBLY USE
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    Re: World in Diamonds

    Post by Ketchup Girl on September 28th 2011, 7:37 am

    "Fun little scenario"?

    Also,
    http://bancomicsans.com/main/

    (Okay, so maybe they're a bit extreme, but you get the point...)


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    Re: World in Diamonds

    Post by iKevinly on September 28th 2011, 5:58 pm

    Ahaha!
    Jenny, you guys would hate me.
    All my lyric sheets are in Comic Sans :) All of them.


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    Re: World in Diamonds

    Post by Sophie on October 25th 2011, 6:43 pm

    Woah, I just read this.
    This is... really pretty.

    I really like this poem a lot.
    BUT ITS SO SAD.

    Kevin, Kevin, are you happier now?


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    Re: World in Diamonds

    Post by Ketchup Girl on October 25th 2011, 8:09 pm

    Soooooooppppppyyyyyyyyyyy why are you necro'ing everything?
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    Re: World in Diamonds

    Post by Sophie on October 25th 2011, 8:12 pm

    To annoy people and get them to come baaaaaack~
    (Plus, since I really haven't read this poem and I wanted to comment. Food. c: )

    Have I really necro-ed that much?
    Sorry! I didn't realize... D:

    No-wai-- I only necroed three threads! It's, um, better then most!


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    Re: World in Diamonds

    Post by iKevinly on October 25th 2011, 10:30 pm

    :3 Thank you Sophie~


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    Re: World in Diamonds

    Post by ZeroCyanide on October 26th 2011, 9:12 pm

    LOL YEAH IT'S BETTER THAN KEVIN'S NECRO SPREE

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