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    Sophie

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    Heartbreaker

    Post by Sophie on September 6th 2011, 6:36 pm





    I totally wrote these lyrics!

    But, uh, last year.
    I found them over the weekend, and decided to re-record them. They're kinda sad, but, meh, I guess I was just going through a sad phase last year at school. OHOHOHOHO

    I know it's not all that good, but, I...I tried! beg

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    The first time we met
    I thought that we could be
    I guess I was too blind
    To see what you could see

    Now I’m all alone
    Inside this lonely place
    I didn’t grasp the chance
    And I slowly lost the race

    You thought love was just
    Motions and the pain
    But I saw something else
    And I tried to change

    I was kind and fair
    I never looked away
    Only to find you
    Planning a wedding day

    Why must you be such
    A dazzling heart-breaker
    I was such a fool
    To hope in this heart-breaker

    Love is such a cruel thing
    Leaving me alone
    Why do I deserve
    To wait here all alone?

    You were always so bright
    Mesmerizing with your shine
    I never felt good enough
    Standing by your side

    I tried so hard to be
    To be that one for you
    I followed so many rules
    And broke that many too


    They say more die
    Of heartbreak then disease
    You cause so much pain
    Playing as you please


    You were a puzzle
    Something dark and strange
    The power you held
    Was something I couldn’t change

    Why must you be such
    A dazzling heart-breaker
    I was such a fool
    To hope in this heart-breaker

    Love is such a cruel thing
    Leaving me alone
    Why do I deserve
    To wait here all alone?

    To be with you
    Was bliss, was skies
    To be apart
    Was rain

    And I tried
    To change
    To be more
    Like you

    But still you threw
    All that away
    And only gave me pain

    So I swear
    I will
    Move on


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    Re: Heartbreaker

    Post by Ketchup Girl on September 6th 2011, 7:48 pm

    Is there any reason why it stops playing halfway through?

    Your singing's really... sweet? No. Nice? No. (Well, it's both sweet and nice but both words are so overused that one sounds fake when saying them. AGH.) And "awesome" is correct but doesn't really convey what I'm trying to say. Either way, I LIKE IT AND DO NOT LET MY FEEBLE LACK OF SAT VOCABULARY LIMIT MY SINCERITY.

    And the lyrics are... nice? Pretty? Sad? CURSE MY LACK OF VOCABULARY ONCE AGAIN. But the lyrics are very good (agh) as well.

    [Witty closing comments deleted due to sincere wish not to bruise Sophie's poor soul with comments on my state of mind when hearing "The River Flows In You" for the effin' millionth time or something.] [GOD, I WILL RIP OUT MY SPLEEN OR SOMETHING IF I HEAR THAT SONG AGAIN.]
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    Re: Heartbreaker

    Post by Sophie on September 6th 2011, 8:10 pm

    Hmm? It cuts off halfway through? I can listen to it fine though, so maybe try again~

    It's okay, your feelings are reciprocated! :D

    But, yes, I agree,
    I can't read your size three font so I quoted you.

    I'm sorry I brought your spleen pain!
    Don't rip it out!

    I'll do a more non-mainstream song in the future!! Nuts.


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    Re: Heartbreaker

    Post by Ketchup Girl on September 6th 2011, 8:28 pm

    WAIT, YOU READ IT? Oh dear lord.

    I'M SORRY FOR ASPLODIN' ABOUT THE SONG, SOPHIE.

    I mean, it's a pretty song and I like it, I guess, but everyone's all "OMG IT'S SO IMPRESSIVE" while it's so... simple. WHY ARE PEOPLE SO ASTOUNDED OVER THIS SIMPLE THING?
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    Re: Heartbreaker

    Post by Sophie on September 6th 2011, 8:40 pm

    It is pretty simple. I taught myself how to play it!
    Ahohohoho~

    Next goal: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y7svyAvNwhQ&feature=related !!


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    Re: Heartbreaker

    Post by poetryinmotion on September 7th 2011, 10:28 pm

    It sounds....delicate....sort of. I did have a hard time with some of the lyrics, because the actual "music" was a bit louder than your voice, but it was really touching. Keep recording things for us pwease!~
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    Re: Heartbreaker

    Post by iKevinly on September 8th 2011, 10:43 pm

    <3 AHH I LOVE PARODIES
    :) GREAT JOB SOPHIE <33.

    :) I love it!

    One thing that I always do with parodies is to post the lyrics~
    This is because, well, we all know that you can sing the beats correctly :)
    But the words make the other half of the parody's awesomeness~
    So do post the lyrics! :)


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    Post by Sophie on September 8th 2011, 10:45 pm

    I added them~
    Thank you!

    You guys give me the excitement to continue! <3


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    Post by iKevinly on September 8th 2011, 10:46 pm

    Yay! =] Great!


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